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Before
The product development system for teams and agents
After
Issue tracking that stays fast as you ship

Why this rewrite

"The product development system for teams and agents" is a category label with an agents tack-on. The subhead already names the real job — planning and building products — then waves "Designed for the AI era." Founders comparing trackers need the outcome in the H1: issue tracking that stays fast as they ship.

Try the same kind of rewrite on the Resay homepage.

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